Pete Von
Ok, I have another question on story writing… what happens next?
So far, Leila Shultz’s bf is Landon who has fractured his shoulder. Haven, a mischivious girl ( they’re in high school in NYC ) offers to help Landon with his school work. Meanwhile, Felicty, a rich valedictorain with sneaky ways, sees Landon and Haven getting a lil too comfortable in the quad. Haven plants one on Landon and Leila sees this all happening.
Here are some other characters in the story:
Leila Shultz: upcoming actress, recently starred in a movie.
Isabel Benton, bubbly Felicty’s bff, sees the kiss.
Nomi Powell, wealthy but nice heiress.
Pete von Locke: Lothario, likes Leila.
Ricky McClure: Landon’s bff
Kathyrn Rose: very friendly, knows both Leila and Nomi.
If i read the story it would help. Also go to webook.com you can post writing with out it getting stolen and also might get published.

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